Sunday, April 3, 2011

my windsong

my windsong;
you are nothing

but my obsession

to transcribe
of the heart
into phantomness
of breath;

of echo
and memory



orfeenix said...

We re all dust in the wind but your songs are stronger that the wind, they' re eternal.

breathenoah said...

i get a sense of hope and hopelessness in this. i like.

Gerry Boyd said...

Crisp and clean Noxy.

lines n shades said...

" cacophony of echo ".. you always give me favorite phrases to choose from.

wonderful :)

forgetmenow said...

awesome ...

every word. pause, breath is controlled to perfection ... allows the reader to implode superbly ...

gorgeous writing

Noxalio said...

thank you all for your kind words and please excuse my late response as it's been somewhat busy over here this past week (also, please excuse my general reply, i usually prefer to answer each individually but i'm afraid i cannot today) ... cheers to you all ...