Monday, March 7, 2011

imagine




imagine
the other one

where
you
and i
are one

and there
our life
interwoven
is not
unraveled

abruptly
as in this
one

less parallel
than stitched
with the same
brilliant
thread

identical

but infused
with much more
profound
élan

itself
imbued
with aversion
to heartache

& certain
misfortune

yes
imagine
this

imagine.




5 comments:

forgetmenow said...

ohhhh noxy -- this is utterly and totally swoonworthy! with an edge of torture too but this makes it all the more exquisite and Real

a most beautiful poem ... you've actually awed me into Complete silence ...

Elisabeth said...

Such a beautiful re-rendition of Imagine. Thanks Nox.

Old 333 said...

Lovely. Lost fortunes; picked stitches. Thanks, Noxalio.

Noxalio said...

oh, thank you Shell and Elisabeth and Peter ...

parallels and synchronicity et al- are they only present in the mind? and multi-verse ... what an awesome possibility ... to encompass everything: the entirety of space, time (including history?), matter, and energy ... super ... no?

Old 333 said...

I do love the term Multiverse.