Friday, January 14, 2011

Homage to a Quiet Commotion




[Inspired by the beautiful poem: California Tide by Wine & Words at Quiet Commotion.
Please visit to read more of her wonderful poems, and don't forget to say hello.]



California waves
hello
even in departure
akin to warm
Aloha embrace
further West
plumeria lays
on sandy beach
dreams--
California waves
and sunsets
amber.

5 comments:

Wine and Words said...

This gets me again....the hello, even in departure. A visual aloha with each wave. But it's more than that. It's the fact that each goodbye is a hello to the next. There's an acceptance in the statement, and optimism.

Noxalio said...

full credit to you, Annie!

forgetmenow said...

gorgeous! i love the amber lastline, a moment/life everpresent in time's heave and flow ...

*sigh

i adore what you're doing here of late, Noxy - it's important, this drawing together of those who should find each other ... thank you!!

S

Noxalio said...

Shell, it seems i've taken up weaving of sorts, no?

a global tapestry, i hope

forgetmenow said...

*heh .. yes you have and bless you dear globalheart ....