
For weekend wordsmith no. 85: Sleepless
ironic is the dream
whose theme is insomnia
and bizarre still to wake
not having slept a wink.
oh struggle, oh trouble,
heartache and nostalgia.
what worry, what vigil,
wrestle, tussle and think.
ironic is the dream
~ noxalio ~
4 comments:
Ooh...I like this one especially your lines 'and bizarre still to wake not having slept a wink'. I think we all know that feeling...
Marianne thanks for reading and commenting - I like yours too especially "tossing
Sheep back to their fields."
you've caught the mental rhythm of insomnia in this, very effective
Juliet thanks for stopping over and also for your comment ... i guess i might have a bit of practice in the art of sleeplessness ... :)
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